I'm torn on this.
The shape is excellent, the finish equally so. The piercings are well done, but whatever you've used for the piercings has left some scorched marks and some not. This is what detracts from the overall effect just ever-so-slightly.
I've seen an NSK (dental drill) used and it leaves all blackened areas where it cuts because of it's high rotational speed, and that looks good. As sanding the piercings to remove the scorching would be almost impossible, you might think to colour all the cut faces black to make them all match.