Although not my style, I don't have a problem with this, I've seen modern ceramicists make pots that are not so dissimilar. It's bold and brash and at times that is exactly what is wanted.
You apologise for not having a proper camera, A phone camera is probably just as good these days, but to put your work against a matt surface would give a far better result. The refection at the bottom detracts the most from the whole image.
